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Vivid Dreams

Slave To REM

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Vivid Dreams
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An acrostic poem on vivid dreams

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V oices in my head call to me, from down the hall

I pull my pillow up - to swiftly cover face

V ast images arise before me, I don’t recognize at all

I must be dreaming, nothing’s familiar in this place

D o I dare communicate, or keep my eyes closed, as if sleeping

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D aylight is hours away, and I am all there is

R em’s holding me captive in its grasp, actively dreaming

E very muscle twitches - till I’m fully his

A nother minute and I may forever be asleep

M oments pass slowly as the clock ticks on the wall

S unrise is the super-power that I need to wake me up. That’s what I get for drinking too much alcohol

fact or fiction

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Wonderful work!! Love the last line! :)

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Great piece. That last line wraps it up perfectly. Well done.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Ah that last line...I think I've been subject to this dream before. HAHA! Great work!

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