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Liberation Night

By Kisama Riyo Published about a year ago 1 min read

In a pitch-black night and pitch-black darkness

The light of a burning candle reached me

It spoke to the depths and the breezes

To leave me with my sadness we declare the agreement

But my paleness appeared to the eye on the night of liberation

It made me in a depression close to suffocation

So who shook me from the depths?

A ghost took me to a paradise outside the range?

A paradise in which each of us declared his longing

Walk with me until we find a necklace to adorn our necks

So if madness overcomes me at the moment of separation

Who will restore my mind to that alignment?

Here the situation is no longer tolerable

We have all stepped towards a bright flash

And drowned the waves in the sea

We did not know that our hearts would become ablaze

So we gathered you today to pursue the passions

Perhaps we will capture with them what is in the depths

So we will be free to sign that covenant

For fear of soldiers who decided to burn us?

sad poetry

About the Creator

Kisama Riyo

I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  • chek about a year ago

    The structure of the poem is beautiful.

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