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Senryu

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago 1 min read

“You, my dear, are so vein.”

Do I really seem that way?

“Show me your neckline.”

Senryu

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Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Love the double meaning of vein here. Lol excellent poem.

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