Unwed
For Judey Kalchiks Anagram Poem and Unofficial Challenge
Introduction
You can find the challenge and details here
The song is Wedding Bells by Kevin Godley and Lol Creme
Unwed
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Hear The Peals Of The Clanging Bells
The Sepals Of The Blooms They Held
Their Heart Leaps At The Wedding Vows
Memory Lapse Forgotten Words
Pleas Unremembered And Unheard
Their Face Pales, A Jilted Lover
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I'm So Proud Of You
Introduction These are some words for someone close to me. The song is "I'm So Proud" written by Curtis Mayfield and released by The Impressions which has been covered by many artists, but I love teh Main Ingrediat one which I have included.
By Mike Singleton π Mikeydred 2 years ago in Poets
Comments (11)
I am just seeing this one. This so echoes the lament of a jilted one. A lovely ode to the heart.
Whoa Mike! That's some special skills!
Very cleverly done β . Really like: βThe Sepals Of The Blooms They Heldβπ€©
This was so heartbreaking and I loveeeeee it!
counted words but just suoerb π
I had to read Judy's challenge to get it, but this is a great take. Well done.
Wow, just wow! Your use of words really shows your talent! <3
Fabulous performance poem!!! Loved it!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
So clever! And what an excellent word choice with great anagrams! Painted a very coherent scene!
Wow! The ending is really sad, after such uplifting opening lines. Well done on weaving such an emotional story out of such a difficult challenge, and so few words.
Well-done wedding intrigue and great use of the anagram!