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Untitled death note

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By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Untitled death note
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does the water on

Top of Everest taste sweet

Its echo screams death.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliantly written!!! Loving it!!!

  • It could be a sweet death, hehehehe. Loved your poem!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    I will never know lines one and two due to line three. Well done, my friend.

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    This one has a deep undercurrent. Nicely done, Melissa!

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Ohh that does make one think. Well done

  • F Cade Swansonabout a year ago

    That took a turn! Really moving question.

  • Stunning words, a beautiful Haiku. ❤️

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