
getting up and out of bed
and going to work
sits at the top of my list
of things that
can get fucked
no really
it can it is it does it will
getting up and out of bed
and going to work
seemingly twice as tired
as the night before
and
at such an ungodly hour
(what comprises a godly hour?)
trying to sleep normal like
that too
escapes eludes eschews
this insomnia holds me
with every waking moment
ringing bells
that don't exist
the drums of hell
bang and persist
a perfect 4/4 fill
i chew
the glass
of the broken
my mouths
my ears
my eyes
all bleed
in this
semi permanent
turning and tossing
errant neuron bossing
when all that's really needed
is just
a healthy mental flossing
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Currently commenting my heartfelt appreciation for this poem instead of sleeping. You said it right.