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You're blue raspberry.
I'm stained from synthetic dye.
From now on — real fruit.
About the Creator
Katie
My whole life I have loved writing, but haven't made the time for it. I'm trying to remedy that now.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme
Violence Begets
"Any last words, cowboy?" "None you'd understand, sodbuster." "Funny. That's Marshall Sodbuster to you. But I meant some last nugget that would help us in the adjudication of the myriad offenses counted against you and your gang. I wasn't asking for penitence."
By Adam Diehl5 days ago in Fiction
Comments (5)
That sneaky 'blue' raspberry! Clever and well written :)
I can taste it. 💙
This is great. That last line nails it. Well done.
It's difficult to evoke emotions in three lines but you nailed it!
That was nice, the problem is that haiku ar short so not sure if my read will register