Undone
Connie and Barbara from The Half Paper Moon
By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 3 years ago • 1 min read
Photo by How-Soon Ngu on Unsplash
Mi amor, I’m amorous in your ethereal aroma floating
All my deep carnal desires are dripping in this back massage I am painting into you, emoting
My Beautiful Barbara, I’m undone by your silver, frisson-trembling dance
It just seems I can’t undo my pants
We are a couple that keeps clothes on, our hearts welcome passionate promoting
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This limerick evokes quite hard and deep emotions - it has a very soft touch to it and lots of passion. Good job!
The poem's positivity and love-filled tone is infectious and leaves the reader feeling uplifted and inspired. Well done!👍👍🧡🧡