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Underneath That Prada Skirt

They will crucify your character before catching a glimpse of what you are made of…

By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 2 years ago 1 min read
Underneath That Prada Skirt
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She is insecure,

With broken devotion…

She Desires Passion,

Nevertheless obtains commotion…

With her Chin 🆙

She Sashay,

As,

Silent questions chime through the wind.

“Does she know where she's Going To?”

“Do you suppose she will succeed?”

No Time to Be Afraid,

Depending on the Universe,

With all her Faith,

She survived to Thrive…

Because Underneath That

Prada Skirt

She was just

A Regular Girl💜💋🦋

Singing Her Pleasure Principle Blues 🎷 🎶

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About the Creator

HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)

“ Public Diary, of an Urban Poet

🎉I am an Actor, Model, Writer, and Entrepreneur ❤️❤️🙏

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward) (Author)2 years ago

    💖💋

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Fabulous!!! Loving it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Sugan Ya 2 years ago

    Great work...!so powerful

  • I'm sooooo in love with your subtitle! Your poem was extremely powerful!

  • ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

  • Novel Allen2 years ago

    I was listening to "Do you know where you're go to, do you like the things that life is showing you". Than I read your poem with the line "Does she know where she is going to". Weird but hey....telepathy lives.

  • I liked both of the lines lifted up below, but the one that really got to me was the last: "Singing her Pleasure Principle blues."

  • Tiffany Gordon2 years ago

    Snaps all around! So empowering & Simply flawless! Go on now... ❤

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    loved "she survived to thrive" and that you showed us the person beneath....we all have layers and you nailed it!

  • This reminds me so much of a YouTube video about relationships. It was about how women go around thinking they have a good man based on his looks and surafce actions, but when they open the Tiffany box or Gucci bag there's nothing inside. Love this line: "Silent questions chime through the wind."

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    Lovely piece. Well done.

  • RP2 years ago

    🩵👏🏼👏🏼💕

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