Twixt & Tween Seems Mean
for James and Oneg's Summer Writing Extrav-again-AGAIN-za!

The Challenge: All Night Long - This challenge asks you to create a story or poem that spans a whole night. What happens? How do you make it through to dawn? But here’s the twist: you must not use the words “light”, “day”, “night” nor “dark”.
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LOUD insects rattle opinions that the quiet birds find obscene
Soothing~grating songs induce sandpaper dreams
or are those the hurried heartbeats of hectic schemes?
Earlier reasoning careens
Thoughts scream to submit & come clean
Silence creates the crime scenes.
It's long past time to vent spleens
Preens should become so routine that they take on sheens that make them more than what they seem
Have fun being mean!
When you blame the machine!
There's no need for sunscreen!
~~ F e e l ✨ S e r e n e✨~~
Take what you can gleam
from betwixt & between
What informs is unseen.
________________Bolt⚡

This poem came about solely because I was tagged by James & Oneg for their challenge. <see below> ⚡😁👍 Initially, I was a little flummoxed about the idea of writing about a night without being able to say 'night' or 'dark.' Then I read Mother Comb's poem and that helped get my creative juices flowing. Here's Mother's poem. 👇
I was in the middle of writing new comedy when I learned I was tagged so I have not yet read anyone else's entry, but I'll be back to read them all soon.
I tag Tiffany Gordon and Raymond G. Taylor!
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Comments (6)
Your inventive imagery has a rhythm as usual and I’m here for it. really loved how this piece pulses with sound even the quiet or inversely, how silence itself becomes unsettling. Lines like ‘Silence creates the crime scenes’ feel simultaneously eerie and poetic. Your use of the writing prompt constraint no ‘light,’ ‘night,’ makes the imagery all the more creative. 💖💖
Nicely done Sweet Bill! Thx 4 tha invite! ☺️
The imagery in this is *chef kiss* Incredible response.
Well done!
Fantastic wow ♦️♦️♦️♦️
Oh!!! Thank you for playing along with us!! This is wonderful <3 <3