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Turn Their Backs

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By Rachel SteinmetzPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Turn Their Backs
Photo by Zhu Liang on Unsplash

How does the breeze stab like

the softest jab of sharp ice?

And the slightest fleece rub like

the feel of shock, but done twice.

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When did red begin to flow

like the stream of silent pain?

And when did night drown out the glow

and build her stars in vain?

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When did they all turn their backs

when life should have been?

Air has filled my many lacks

Filled with hollowness so thin.

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Why do unanswered questions

ask for peace in return?

Never offering thier lessons

but tearing holes that others burn.

sad poetry

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Rachel Steinmetz

Written expression is emotion at its peak; delve into it.

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Wow deep! Excellent writing.

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    You have such a gift for poetry. I loved your line - and build her stars in vain.

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