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True Loss

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By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - July 2024
True Loss
Photo by Girl with red hat on Unsplash

I remember fearing losing you

Who I would become without you

Now I look in the mirror

And don’t know who I am

With you by my side

It’s sad to know

All along

I’d lost

Me

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • SoftSpokenStoriesabout a year ago

    amazing story of the day. Can you please guide me by reading my story?

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    I agree with Teena...it goes directly to the bones...stings a little too. Yep...relatable and wonderfully human. Cingrats.

  • Snarky Lisaabout a year ago

    Haunting and often applicable to many aspects of loss.

  • Amit Kohli about a year ago

    Nice one . congrats for TS

  • Kendall Defoe about a year ago

    Is it strange that, from the photo and language, I am thinking of a dog?

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    A very sad truth expressed in just the right way...poetically. Congratulations on writing a winner of a top story-poem!

  • Sandra Tenaabout a year ago

    Oh Kelli, I feel this in my bones! 💓 Such a well-deserved TS xx

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Congrats on Too Story!🤩🤩🤩🤩

  • F Cade Swansonabout a year ago

    beautifully articulated and sad. well done! congrats on ts!

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    This hits home very close. Truly a great piece with such honesty!

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Brilliantly written and congratulations on Top Story!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Beautifully sad. Well done, Kelli!

  • angela hepworthabout a year ago

    Ugh, so powerful.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on the TS.

  • Mark Graham2 years ago

    Yes we must remember who we are in a relationship to really exist.

  • Silver Daux2 years ago

    This is a real gut-punch of a poem. Wonderful job!

  • Well-wrought!

  • And if (when you choose) to have another, hang on tight to you because you are "it". Number one! You slung it well, Kelli Boo!

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    This is wonderful. Well done.

  • Wow! this one was really deep! amazing entry Kelli. Super proud of you. Still working on mine. :)

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Oooft this one hits hard in the gut. Great entry, Kelli

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Oh no, that is the worst love to lose oneself....great poem!

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