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Caught in the act, you arrested me
Tried in your crucible of love
Watched as you built my gallows
Willingly I trod stairs
To meet final fate
Heart in noose
Lever
Pulled
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
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On-point and relevant
Writing reflected the title & theme


Comments (4)
Oooo, I really love the idea of heart in noose! So well done!
Excellent nonets, I like your choice of words
oh this us GOOD! The metaphors in these nonets are terrific 😁
My salute for that. Heartbroken.