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Tried & Tied

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By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Tried & Tied
Photo by Alireza Jalilian on Unsplash

Caught in the act, you arrested me

Tried in your crucible of love

Watched as you built my gallows

Willingly I trod stairs

To meet final fate

Heart in noose

Lever

Pulled

heartbreak

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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    Writing reflected the title & theme

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Oooo, I really love the idea of heart in noose! So well done!

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellent nonets, I like your choice of words

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    oh this us GOOD! The metaphors in these nonets are terrific 😁

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    My salute for that. Heartbroken.

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