Whipped Indulgence
For breakup nonet challenge
By Andrew C McDonaldPublished about a year ago • 1 min read
Laid bare my wounded heart unto you
You kissed it with cat-o-nine-tails
Blooded furrows cross my soul
Still I begged for more ... worse
Fierce, you struck again
Struck til your will
To indulge
Sorrow
Fled
About the Creator
Andrew C McDonald
Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.
https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp
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Hey you published this too! Awesomeeee!!
Amazing piece
Nice job, McDonald.
Wow! That was really good!