1/
We are trickles of time
that fall off freely
together with the ticking seconds
leaving behind numbers.
Naked amidst the busyness
named as days...
We are wanderers of fate
that intertwine
tackle the rivers of destiny.
And never be able to digest
the future.
; Because we are just
God's Boats
which never the ends.
Looking for its own estuary.
2/
We humans are mortal beings.
'Always stammering spelling the word love in prayers'.
Going from one silence to another (feeling happy).
Then the world is like a mirage full of expectations.
We humans walk the road in thirst.
We are humans travel the distance,
on a path built from the desires
of others (feeling alienated).
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Shafa Ichwanus
Hello, dear readers. I’m Shafa Ichwanus, and I have been a literary writer for the past 15 years. I compose poetry, short stories, drama scripts, and even serialized tales in the form of mini-novels on a wide range of themes.
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You and I are both ordinary months Lead an ordinary life. Without extraordinary achievements Nor do they have superpowers. But they are all striving to live. For one's own dream. In order to bring a better life to one's family.