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Respect her beauty,
Or she may swallow you whole,
For your sacrilege.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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Comments (19)
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Is that Pele? Hope you didn't bring any Hawaiian rocks home!
😯what a commentary! ❤️
I've always been a sucker for poems with powerful messages like this! Well done!
Nice reminder to respect nature instead of damaging it. I can definitely get behind the message. Good Job!
Nice 👍
Beautifully written!
Nice... Respect is a powerful word that drives the tone of this poem.
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She don't play! Don't mess with mother nature❤️
Brilliant Cathy.
Mother nature will get you quick!
Very, very well done! It reminded me of a mountain in South Kazakhstan where several climbers disappeared and were never found. There are plaques with their, pictures, names, and the dates of their disappearances.
I’m curious about this poem. It makes me ask questions- is the mountain being personified, or are there religious rituals that take place on the mountain? Of course you don’t have to answer-sometimes that’s the point of poetry-but I wanted you to know it made me think!
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Loved the powerful personification of the mountain. The image is great, too.
Wow!!!
Oooh I really love how she’ll “swallow you whole”… great wording and emotions, well done!! 😊❤️
Oh, I loved the personification and the image! Together, they really strike a chord. Loved it!
She is powerful 🔥
Oh wow! Beutiful poem!