Train of Thought - Derailed
Just a typical work day
Dogs need to go out again
Incessant barking starts
Some meth head in the alley
Toppled a shopping cart
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Read my friends' new stories
As they roll in on my feed
Comment on their excellence
Top Stories! More to read!
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Is that a new Challenge?
Okay, let's give it a go!
Now, where was I?
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This was written for the "Dancing with Distraction" Acrostic challenge. You can read all about it here:
There really aren't enough letters to describe them all. Maybe it needs a Part 2. (No! I'm joking!)
Thanks for letting me distract you for a minute!
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.
My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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"I just can't do this anymore..." "Do what?" What can't you do? Put gas in your own car? I swear to God you make me take care of everything, don't you? You know I'm on my way to work right now but that never stops you from bothering me, does it?"
By Shirley Belk6 days ago in Fiction
Comments (23)
Great Work ❤️ 👏
Clever and also a Great challenge Admission 😊❤️💯📝❗
Be careful what you ask for... 😈
This was too real 😁
Haha! SO GOOD AND SO TRUE! I'm all for a part two! haha!
😂. Love it
Mission accomplished. Fully distracted.
I love what you’ve done here lol relatable.
Lol. That was great. I felt that.
This is the best description of a distracted writer I have ever read. Wait? Where was I? Shit, Lost my train of thought again. Anyway, great story.
LOL, just a typical work day...hahahah!! This was such a great one. And I'm not procrastinating putting the sheets on my bed by being distracted with reading!
Oh, this was great! 😂 I needed a laugh!
Excellent! I can relate to so much of this!
You just know I read more acrostics because I am putting off doing something .. right?
So many diverting spurs, and so few direct lines. Hard to concentrate sometimes, even in a retirement community. Love the title!
Perfect, just perfect
lol-A great distraction 😊
Fabulous!!! Right on!!!💖💖💕
So many ... 🤪
This is great! Thanks for the laugh!!
That was a good distraction!
I love it, especially the distracted ending. Perfect! Well done, Dana.
That was awesome! Straight to the point and no muckin around! Love 💖it!