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๐ข๐พ๐ท๐ผ๐ฑ๐ฒ๐ท๐ฎ ๐ฐ๐ธ๐ต๐ญ ๐๐ช๐ผ ๐ฑ๐ฎ๐ป ๐ผ๐ธ๐พ๐ต #6

It wore the voice of something sweet,
like nectar pooled at poisoned feet.
A brush, a touchโdivine, divineโ
but laced with rust beneath the shine.
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It bloomed in gardens carved from grace,
then spoiled the roots it once embraced.
The vine that said โI cling for youโ
was choking all it once clung to.
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It hummed a song of something sweet,
so saccharine it gave defeat.
It said โyouโre mineโ in velvet tonesโ
then turned my spine to brittle bones.
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Sweet, I said, when truth grew thin.
Sweet, I begged, and let it in.
Sweet, I whispered with an ache,
and to every dream it came to break.
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Sweet sweet, the echo in my head,
sweet sweet, the poison that it fed.
Sweet sweet, I wore it like a crownโ
while everything I was burned down.
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Sweet sweet sweet, it filled my breath,
a lullaby that smelled like death.
Sweet sweet sweet, the only soundโ
until I couldn't tell the ground
from sky, or flame from light, or me
from all this soft-slick tragedy.
Hope you enjoyed โฅ
About the Creator
Lou Holz
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Suit up and read - it's gonna be legen - wait for it - dary.
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Comments (6)
A powerful portrayal of the allure and danger of sweetnessโit's haunting how beautifully the poison seeps in.
This is amazing, you have a real talent
Beautifully penned. The sweet refrain really build up the underlying menace.
Good start and amazing poem, and well written.
The repetition of the word "sweet" made this seem like song lyrics. Loved it so much!
Another belter of a poem from you. I started reading and thought - oof, fab line and then it just got better from there. Fab.