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Touch my Heart

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By Antoinette L BreyPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Touch my Heart
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I no longer search

for the Gem in the sand

My words seem to spur the same

reactions - again and again

How rare, and where hides

The gem that will make my heart sing

At 60 he will not sit in front of a society-molded TV

With dreams that have died

Sounding like every other Tom, Dick, or Harry

He is not a blob with no goals

I want to hear those desires

When I cry help me move toward mine

I want to find a gem in the sand

The gem that will make my heart sing

love poems

About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Hannah Moore3 years ago

    This feels like an awakening.

  • I like the change from beginning to end, now wanting to find the gem in the sand again. Very beautiful poem.

  • Blessedly blissful. If there's anything trickier than Love poems, then it must be fiction. Kudos to you for your courage & thanks for sharing w/ us. To your success.

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    You could feel the honesty in this, loved it!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Lovely love poem!!! Left some love!!!

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