A thousand shards of glass burst into my face
I see the rain
It is crimson red
Falling upward
I feel a sharp ache in my head
I am flying
I get dizzy
From dancing in the air
I should have worn a wingsuit
Then I could soar
like a bird
or a flying squirrel
~
A flash of light over comes me
hot as blazes
I'm struck down
Lying on my back
I stare up and
I see clouds there
swirling all around
~
3 little birds dance in a circle
right above me
One is blue
With a stripe of black and
speckles on the back
2 is of fire
Its flames follow it as
its wings flap around
The other is a plain yellow
A beak that hooks down and
claws like razor blades
~
My eyes they
can barely stay open
The three little birds merge and
through batting eyes, I
see a rainbow of flames
maybe I could sleep for a little while
my bodies numb and I'm really tired
~
Momentarily, consciousness
above me faces
I won't ever miss
~
~
~
Quiet room
beeping sounds
no one around
And where were you?
Getting high with the neighbor
On crystal clear drugs
while i sleep right beside you
And where were you?
When I couldn't stand
and you walked to fast
looking back and getting mad
And now you
abandoned me for the last time
as you lay to rest
in consecrated ground
8 years since I've seen you
and I'm still bitter now
you've been free from our promise
for about one year now
But I won't go back
I'll follow through
And now when I think of you
A smile
slides onto
my face
*
It's never what you think, is it?
About the Creator
Tanya Lei
A poet, if nothing else.
In a blank space, captivating words flow freely to create something that has not existed before.
From my mind, to yours.
https://www.instagram.com/soulpaintedart/
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Comments (5)
Stunning work!
This all sounds so frightening, yet realistic. You've done a wonderful job.
🌪️Gosh, I love how you keep surprising us. 🐿️I am wondering 🤔 since the shards burst into your face... 🐦The rain... Crimson... 🌪️But not only that — it was falling upwards 😲 🐿️Oh I like that, 'a flying squirrel'. Wait ... 🤔 🐦I could experience the rhythm in this first part. 🌪️Damn. I feel like I was plunged into an accident. Made even more real with those three little birds. Not to mention the clouds swirling all around. 🐿️No 🙂↔️ it's never what we think at all. Wow. I'm... I'm speechless. 'You abandoned me for the last time, as you lay to rest in consecrated ground'. 🐦I feel like I was hit by a tree. This was outstanding. It was entertaining. It was shocking. It was deep and it made me feel things on an emotional level. 🤗🖤❤️
You’ve captured trauma, betrayal, and eventual peace with such fierce clarity.
Haunting and powerful — the imagery and emotion hit hard, blending pain and reflection beautifully.