Topsy-Turvy
Wonderland Poetry Prompt Challenge Day 28

As my naive youth grew eyes that could clearly see
I began to notice how they treated her;
a toy tipped over by a curious child
that was never taught to keep their hands to themselves.
They stripped her soil bare without apology,
tried to fence in oceans.
Ash floats, soft as snow, but twice as deadly.
They pat our heads and say the sky remains above us,
but our compasses no longer point towards true north,
compassion bleeding out through lava flows,
the birds no longer migrating south.
Walls constructed, painted in safety orange,
kindness set ablaze, polluting the air with
"it is what it is" smoke,
as if collapse has become custom,
and silence a virtue.
The ground quakes, cracks,
from all the weight we refuse to carry for each other.
She is not asleep.
She is watching, listening,
waiting to speak in fire
what we have become too proud to whisper
in love.
About the Creator
Ellie Hoovs
Breathing life into the lost and broken. Writes to mend what fire couldn't destroy. Poetry stitched from ashes, longing, and stubborn hope.
My Poetry Collection DEMORTALIZING is out now!!!: https://a.co/d/5fqwmEb


Comments (7)
Here is my entry for Topsy-Turvy: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/topsy-turvy-wwj1u0jvc%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Great poem and observations, Ellie.
Here’s my chaotic caper: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/topsy-turvy-comes-to-town%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E Wow Ellie! An extremely powerful poem! I especially liked: “kindness set ablaze, polluting the air with "it is what it is" smoke, as if collapse has become custom, and silence a virtue. “✅
Preach it! You would think some of these people had a backup planet on lock. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/mermaid-in-a-snowglobe%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cdiv class="css-w4qknv-Replies">
Getting near the end now, Ellie. Here is my Day 28 contribution: https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/stop-the-world-i-want-to-get-off-2nnix0x9k%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E You have expressed the concerns of many very eloquently, Ellie. A very nice exposé of what is happening. 😊😊
Felt like venting out our rage through words. Excellent work @Ellie Hoovs
Excellent ecological observations
A powerful poem about humanity’s neglect of Earth, capturing her silent rage and our lost compassion