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Toppling the Family Tree

Erasing a legacy of evil

By K.B. Silver Published 4 months ago 1 min read
Honorable Mention in Roots and Branches Challenge
Toppling the Family Tree
Photo by Hennie Stander on Unsplash

The view is clear now, from the top

The last tangled rung

Hacked free of my climbing limbs

Grasping rot spreads for miles around

A black, slimy film

Originating at the base of my family tree

Roots soft and fetid

Mold spores floating on the sickening breeze

𓆱𖣂𓆱

Every generation

Falling shorter than the last

No nourishment or light

Penetrating the haunted morass

All that’s left behind are the

Evils that test and try us all

Evaporated in the bog

A concentrated disease of the soul

𓆱𖣂𓆱

Nearby orchards

Fallen in blighted grief

No copper band or routed notch

Will stop the reeking slurk

Seeping from perforated xylem

Weeping poison from barren tethers

The willow tree of my ancestral tribulation

𓆱𖣂𓆱

My final task: trim its serpentine branches

Crush minty leaves beneath my feet

Douse the desiccated wood with the

Liquid light of day

Exposure causing the

Wretched heart of sorrow to scream in

Observed agony

Striking a packet of old hotel matches

I toss it without mercy

Burning my fallen past

In the unpromised hope of a

Future free from torment

𓆱𖣂𓆱

Steep scattered chips of bark

With piercing needles of pine

I’ll need the tonic to recover

Chopping the trunk will be

My final familial endeavor

The only way to escape this

Dying Meadow

Balancing on a narrow

Sinking log

Running, without a glance behind

Before I'm reclaimed by

History’s black shine

K.B. Silver

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About the Creator

K.B. Silver

K.B. Silver has poems published in magazine Wishbone Words, and lit journals: Sheepshead Review, New Note Poetry, Twisted Vine, Avant Appa[achia, Plants and Poetry, recordings in Stanza Cannon, and pieces in Wingless Dreamer anthologies.

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  • The Dani Writer14 days ago

    That felt like catharsis blow-by-blow commentary. How did it feel in the writing of it? There were places in the reading of it where I could have slipped down a metaphorical hole for real. Kudos on your placement!

  • Marilyn Glover17 days ago

    K.B., this is an astounding poem; You did a fine job here. Congratulations on your win❣🌹 This is quite the image: "Striking a packet of old hotel matches I toss it without mercy Burning my fallen past In the unpromised hope of a Future free from torment"

  • Sam Spinelli19 days ago

    Damn, this is incredible writing. Sharp, brutal rather than merely poignant. You’ve perfectly translated the idea of a legacy of poison and pain, to the image of the family tree. Every word feels perfectly placed, for maximum effect, without being cliche or overwrought. Beautiful work, I’m glad you got some recognition with this— well earned!

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your honourable mention! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Edward Swafford20 days ago

    Congrats on a stunner of a poem!!

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