Today I Left The Office
A poem
Today I left the office...
Wet and wild and soaked in blood.
It was a day like any other.
Thrown about in a hurricane
of motionless contribution.
Waterboarded by the inconsequence
of aspirational design.
The lardy tales of nothingness
dripping down my sighs.
Winning awards for arguments with
the snivelling office prick.
Whilst the eagles of insanity
circle to take their pick.
Spinning on a roulette wheel
through chambers of mirrors.
Shuffling sheets of indifference
as though there could be winners.
A nibbled ear
that takes with it
a stinking pound of flesh.
Eating for lunch
a battering ram,
with a side of salty chips.
Smarting at the sneers.
Lazy with the lies.
A hundred horses pulling me
across the cunty mile.
A thousand locks
for a ship that's docked.
A prisoner
in quickening claptrap sand.
Hoarse from shouting whispers
over a marching brass band.
Whilst the music
in what matters
nobody appears to hear.
Drowned in the subordination
of my dried-up tears.
Broadly speaking,
tube line seeking,
engine packing in.
Another TV dinner
and a towel that's been thrown in.
Ambition a burst blister,
raw on my hide.
Experience an abyss,
with a filthy, blood-sweat tide.
I am a cannon fodder weirdo.
A crack in a concrete floor.
Picking glass out of my face
where I banged it against the wall.
About the Creator
Caroline Jane
CJ lost the plot a long time ago. Now, she writes to explore where all paths lead, collecting crumbs of perspective as her pen travels. One day, she may have enough for a cake, which will, no doubt, be fruity.
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Comments (9)
I loved everything about this from the form, to the rhythm, to the word choices, to the subject matter. Brilliant!
Wow, this was incredibly amazing! Loved your poem!
Very cool!
Awesome in every way!!! 💖💕
Excellent words
Yes!! I have had those days. Well done.
Oh my. I felt that. Excellent
YES! I just felt this is my spine. Excellent!🙌👏❤️
Oh good lord! Now that's a bad day at the office! Was equal parts disturbed and seen. Very well done!