To the Depths
A Teaser
"This is an end," she cried
stumbling down the steps of the burning monument
screams of shock echoing through the waves
of sea-foam, tears - and yes through her very marrow -
once thought made gold by THOSE gods;
a pair forever annihilating each other in precarious balance.
( A balance never to be kept. )
How ridiculous was their faith to be placed into something
so volatile, hanging on the threads of mutual destruction?
She questions it only now as her robes of white press flush against her shivering skin -
robes for show, robes for mercy - all that was and ever will be
swallowed up by the wave cresting the cliffside - the whole world,
( an embrace, an agonizing death? )
and there with her arms outstretched - in desperation?
her fingers curling into strung out pearls of sorrow;
"This is our end!"
What could I say to comfort the apostle
when I myself felt gravity like a chain
pulling me into the depths to outrun the very gods?
( That unstoppable wave? )
I must reach out, regardless,
to hold her through to the end.
"Then let us be drowned, you and I,
and hope for a better horizon; a tomorrow without tears,
for that is all we have ever wanted."
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Author's Note:
Another stream of consciousness poem that serves as a partner to To Stardust and to To Starfall ( just published today! ).
All are teasers for a future project. c:
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About the Creator
Amanda Starks
Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
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Comments (14)
i love this piece
Beautiful, melanchony but not hopeless. A mere fact, staking its claim in the world. Thank you for writing and sharing and congratz on your top story!
Great job! π
You really did a great job .so intelligent
Very interesting
Very interesting and well written!
Gorgeously eloquent and emotive - congrats on the well-deserved Top Story! :)
This is an amazing piece of poetry. Congratulations, too, on the Top Story.
great
Woah! Magnificent!
Nicely done! Congrats on the TS.
I've not read the other but I am tantalised!
This is a very nice accompaniment to βTo Stardustβ. It really makes me want to see where this new project is going. Keep up the excellent work. π
Well done.