That fleeting brush of lips,
A thousand nerve endings tickle
And tingle,
Do it again!
Kiss more firmly,
Arms wrap around,
Closer bodies
Do it more!
Kisses, lips, tongue,
Mingled breath,
Passion sparked,
There is no, enough!
The dance of love begins like this,
With a kiss.
About the Creator
Ruth Stewart
Never one to do one thing at a time, I'm currently writing a horror novel and a book of poetry for the daughters of narcissists. Come back soon for a link to be included in all my news, on Vocal and elsewhere. I'd love to get to know you!
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Comments (4)
You perfectly captured the way a kiss is the start of something. Something loving or toxic, lasting or brief, we really donβt know. Maybe thatβs what makes it so exciting. Love this. π
This was so intimate, sweet and beautiful! I loved it!
This is very well done. I am branching out into some romances in my writing now and finding it hard to portray it on the page. This is inspiring for me!
This is...very...honest and spot-on! Well done... :)