To Give Over a Message
"Tell all the truth but tell it slant" - Emily Dickinson
It is not to compare a message understood
from an outsider than from one's own mind.
And so, when telling a tale of depth,
you must hide the moral in a form they must find.
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A lesson grasped from one's own insight
is one that remains forevermore.
More than a teacher who claims to know
but then builds nothing besides for bore.
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Conceal your words in wisps of wisdom.
Build a backdrop and let your message blend in.
Watch an audience as their eyes ignite
with the pleasure of discovering a self-revealed doctrine.
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And while you stand in the shadows of silence
your heart will swell with hidden pride.
Now they have felt the beauty of finding
the message you searched your thesaurus to hide.
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Rachel Steinmetz
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Comments (4)
Great poetry!
Excellent, thanks for the advice
so so true! Great one.
Brilliant Rachel, a big one.