
the highlight of my week sometimes
is the dull buzz that three beers brings
the sweet relief encased in a pre-chilled pint glass
...just simple pissy things
cannot wait to open the fridge
and see a row of coldies standing there
all lined up and ready to go
and not one do i have to share
that icy cold pffftttt.....
condensation on the coaster
my amber chalice is held proudly aloft
and revered, by me; the toaster
it's the sip that's a gulp
the endless sparkling drops
the flavour the aroma
of the malt and the hops
a couple won't kill me
but a couple won't do
could easily drink a dozen
but probably only need two
and when all is said and done
it's the perfect way to end the day
pop the top just sit and flop
a enjoy a fluid segue from work to play
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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This was so good and it really made me want a 🍺!
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Bless this ardent, amber alchemy and its compellingly colorful history. A worthy ode to its glory. -"pleasedrinkresponsibly"