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Thirty-Three Years

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By Rowan Finley Published 9 months ago Updated 7 months ago 1 min read
Photo by Chinmay Singh: https://www.pexels.com/photo/man-wears-black-and-white-tank-top-and-black-knit-cap-868548/

I tattooed your very name on my neck.

Wrapped in a bleak blanket, feeling like a wreck.

Oh, the havoc you’ve caused me so many nights…

Now, you’re gone.

Who would have murdered you?

The shock pierces like an icicle in the middle of my heart.

My children.

Your children, they don’t have a biological father now.

Your life was precious.

Every day of your thirty-three years.

Even though you caused me pain beyond measure,

I still loved you in a way,

and now, you’re just gone.

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About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal9 months ago

    This is heartbreakingly raw and powerful! Even when people hurt us deeply, their absence can still carve out a hollow space we never expected. Healing doesn’t mean forgetting — it means learning how to carry it differently.😊

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