
Gandering at the grandeur of the morning mist,
yes, it lifts so free, with jubilee.
I think on the shades of sanded mystery,
and I remember all the roots of pain,
the agony, as the roots, they feel as heavy as iron.
I just long to disappear;
they remind me of all my mistakes;
even some of the vibrant flowers agree,
because they shake their heads,
apparently, for most to see.
I ask Jesus, with salty prayers,
“Why do I give and give so much,
and none of it seems enough, not even a lick, or even a touch?”
He replies, with a gentle smile and sigh and says,
“I gave all my blood I had to spill,
and still,
to this day,
most refuse to accept me…”
About the Creator
Rowan Finley
Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.
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