There Is A Darkness
A Dark Sedoka. Also My forty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena
This is my third attempt at a Sedoka (shadow poetry), a poetic form introduced to me by Loryne Andawey and you can read the definition here.
I also found a confirming article here
This is my forty-seventh dark poem in the series inspired by Dharrsheena.
The Sedoka Format is very short taking the form of a pair of katauta as a single poem, which can address the same subject from differing perspectives.
The music is "There Is A Darkness" by Bonnie "Prince" Billie
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There Is A Darkness
And That Will Soon Take Your Soul
And Leave A Rotting Carcass
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Your Flesh Will Be Stripped
You Are Blind In The Darkness
A Flayed Corpse On The Cold Slab
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Comments (6)
Creepy feels like Halloween!!! Wonderfully written!!!β€οΈβ€οΈπ
I love a bit of darkness. This was brilliant! π€
That's spooky and really well done.
Excellent work... Very well done!!!
This was sooooo fantastic! Loved this Sedoka!
Ahhh! Chills! So creepy! You're inspiring me to write darker verses. Well done π€