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The wrong embrace

Love is cruel

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The wrong embrace

You were a blade hidden in silk,

A quiet ache behind a kiss.

Your touch, a whisper of thorns,

Promising comfort, delivering hurt.

I drank from your words like poison,

Sweet on the tongue, bitter below.

You made me a shrine of ruin,

A wilted bloom forced to grow.

Your built walls, not bridges,

Each caress a silent snare.

I mistook your cold for longing,

Saw warmth in your vacant stare.

I was the moth, you the fire,

Dancing closer with every sigh.

You watched me cry without blinking,

Counting the seconds ‘til I’d die.

Love was a knife you wielded,

Cutting me open, inch by inch.

I bled devotion in the silence,

A wound too deep to ever flinch.

And now, a ghost of your shadow,

I haunt the ruin you left behind.

Loving you was a slow surrender,

A cruel embrace, a darkened mind.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is a poem that brings out a lot of emotions in dealing with various relationships that one may be experiencing one way or another. Good job.

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