The Wild Geese
a haiku
Photo by Charles Jackson on Unsplash
wild geese pass over
stitching the sky together
their seam on my heart
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Natalie Wilkinson
Writing. Woven and Printed Textile Design. Architectural Drafting. Learning Japanese. Gardening. Not necessarily in that order.
IG: @maisonette _textiles
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Comments (47)
Did I not read this one? I love it so much!! That last line is everything. Just incredible metaphor work here, Natalie!
Good morning
Congrats on winning. Beautifully done.
A beautiful Haiku - Nicely done!
So lovely. Congratulations
Congratulations 🎊 👏
Congrats!
Beautiful ♥︎
Wow!!! Such an incredible haiku. Seemingly embodying the simple yet beautiful nature of haiku. Congratulations!!! A well deserved win. Well done 😁👍🍁.
Well done… beautiful poem for gorgeous geese.🤩
Beautiful poem! Congratulations.
this is just lovely !
Simply breathtaking, Natalie! I am an avid birder so this is an added delight to read. Congratulations! 👏 🎉 💙
ooooh wow! congrats, Natalie! so very well deserved!
I can see that your textile design has influenced your poetry! Makes me curious to see the poetry of your textiles 😊 Lovely work and well-deserved win...
Wow. Congrats!!!
Congrats on the win. I tried.
High-5
I feel the love in this haiku. Congratulations!
Such a beautifully gentle piece. Congrats this is truly stunning 💜 c
Congratulations ❤️ Beautiful Haiku and well deserving of win ❤️
Yes, this is beautiful!
Congratulations, Natalie! A very deserved win!! 🤗✨
Congratulations. Beautiful. 🥰
Congratulations we’ll done