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The Clock Can’t Follow the Sunlight

A Sijo Poem

By Natalie WilkinsonPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Clock Can’t Follow the Sunlight
Photo by Ivana Cajina on Unsplash

The man-made change of seasons,

depression's food autumn and spring,

for three weeks timing flounders

on the burner of deficit.

The clock can't follow the sunlight

over mountains to its hearth.

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Each year, the Sejong Cultural Society runs one or two competitions for sijo- traditional Korean form poetry that was originally set to music.

The form follows a strict syllable count as does haiku, but the rules can be bent to the service of the overall meaning.

The first line is composed of a 3/4/4/4 syllable count introducing the theme of the poem.

The second line is also composed of 3/4/4/4 syllable groupings and expands upon the theme.

In the third line, a counter theme group of 3/5 syllables is introduced followed by the conclusion, a 4/3 syllable grouping.

You can find out more about how to write a sijo and read entries by past years winners at The Sejong Cultural Society website.

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About the Creator

Natalie Wilkinson

Writing. Woven and Printed Textile Design. Architectural Drafting. Learning Japanese. Gardening. Not necessarily in that order.

IG: @maisonette _textiles

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  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Oh my this is stunning! I’ve never heard of sijo before. I’m intrigued!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡about a year ago

    ⚡♥️⚡

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Beautiful piece. Well done.

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Beautifully written and sharing the format was a bonus!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Daphsamabout a year ago

    Wow, I didn't know about this one. Fun to give it a try!

  • Thank you for introducing me to this poetry form, I will try it myself soon

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