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The Weight of Brokenness

A Reflection on the Enduring Impact of Brokenness

By RhythmandRPMPublished 12 months ago 1 min read
The Weight of Brokenness
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As I stood there, surrounded by the fragments of shattered dreams and the echoes of forgotten laughter, I felt the weight of sadness settle upon me. It was a realization that had been creeping up on me for some time, but only now had it finally taken hold. Once people are broken in certain ways, they can never truly be fixed.

It's a harsh truth, one that nobody warns you about when you're young and full of hope. You're led to believe that every wound can be healed, every mistake can be forgiven, and every heart can be mended. But as you grow older, you begin to see the cracks in the facade. You watch as the people around you break, one by one, like delicate glass dropped on cold, hard stone.

Their smiles fade, their laughter silences, and their eyes lose their sparkle. They become shadows of their former selves, haunting the memories of what once was. And you're left wondering, when will it be my turn? Or has it already happened, and I'm just too blind to see it?

The thought is a heavy burden to carry, a constant reminder that we're all fragile, all vulnerable to the whims of fate. But it's also a reminder to cherish the moments we have, to hold dear the people who bring light and love into our lives. For in the end, it's not the brokenness that defines us, but the way we respond to it, the way we learn to heal, and the way we find the courage to keep moving forward, even in the face of adversity.

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  • Enoch Emmanuel Yakda12 months ago

    Dreamt about this

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