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The Watcher

A Poem

By Mother CombsPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

He watches over his city

High above on the rooftops

Protecting it from the supernatural

Watching out for dark witchcraft

He sits on his ledge

Never once seeming to move

Guarding against evil voodoo

All under the unanimous disguise

Of an inanimate creature made of stone

Never once get appreciation

Never once being honored

For heroic deeds he does

For the protection he gives to the city

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Mother Combs

Come near, sit a spell, and listen to tales of old as I sit and rock by my fire. I'll serve you some cocoa and cookies as I tell you of the time long gone by when your Greats-greats once lived.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

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    Original narrative & well developed characters

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  • Test2 years ago

    I love the moodiness of this poem, it felt like an opening set of lines before an epic tale!

  • Hannah Moore2 years ago

    That's how you end up with a heart of stone.

  • Awww, I feel so sad for him. I wanna give him a hug and say thank you 🥺❤️

  • Kenny Penn2 years ago

    Reminds me of a cartoon I watched when I was a kid. I think it was called Gargoyles. Great piece, M.C.

  • Dana Crandell2 years ago

    This invokes empathy for the gargoyle very nicely. Well done, Sharon!

  • Paul Stewart2 years ago

    Love the image and your compelling and intriguing words. Feels like something old-world! Well done, Sharon!

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