The Void
When Darkness Devours, No Soul Escapes
The night splits open with a breathless wail,
A scraping sound, like nails on rusted shale.
The walls ooze shadows thick as sin,
Something ancient stirs within.
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The air—too still, unnervingly tight,
Reeks of decay, of stolen light.
Each breath you take, cursed and cold,
Like whispers from the grave’s dark fold.
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A knock—three times, slow and deep,
Echoes through the house that sleeps.
No hands, no face, just something near,
Lurking close, feeding on fear.
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Beneath the bed, the sheets grow wet,
A slither, a twitch—an unseen threat.
Limbs and eyes, grotesque, they stare,
Hungry shapes that fill the air.
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The mirror cracks—not just a break,
But something crawls, a twisted shape.
Its grin, too wide, its skin too tight,
Eyes devour all in sight.
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It moves like rot, like death reborn,
Fingers stretched, broken, and worn.
It touches you—your breath ignites,
Your soul consumed by endless night.
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You try to scream, your voice won’t come,
Your body frozen, mind gone numb.
It slithers in beneath your skin,
Wearing you like its darkest sin.
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The walls bleed red from its latest feast,
A sacrifice to the deceased.
Time collapses, terror grows,
A nightmare that the mind bestows.
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Your body jerks, your thoughts unwind,
The horror feasts on what it finds.
And now it grins through your dead gaze—
A puppet lost in endless haze.
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No dawn will break, no light will rise,
Just endless dark behind your eyes.
The void consumes all hope, all sight—
And you are nothing in the night.
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Comments (11)
Great poem. Love the rhythm of it and the tone it creates.
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Nice job! I like how you play around with words.
What a great poem for I can visualize this void.
Bravo again! Such unsettling imagery, perfect for this Augtober season!