The Vocal Villanelle Challenge
A Humourous Take On Vocal Mishaps In Previous Challenges
This is a humorous take on the new Vocal challenge. No offence is meant.
We all make mistakes.
The music is Split Enz's (they became Crowded House) almost Brechtian "My Mistake"
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The New Vocal Challenge, A Villanelle
But Then, Oh My God, There's A Disaster
And After This New One Started So Well
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Then Someone Sounded The Finishing Bell
Creators' Faces Were Filled With Horror
The New Vocal Challenge, A Villanelle
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There Is Something Wrong Here, Like A Bad Smell
Questions Have Been Asked Of Vocal's Masters
And After This New One Started So Well
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Will It Be All Right? Who Out There Can Tell?
Sure, They Will Need More Than A Plaster For
The New Vocal Challenge, A Villanelle
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So Do We Think This Result They Can Sell?
We All Make Mistakes, You Know That's For Sure
And After This New One Started So Well
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So What Was The Issue So Terrible?
Vocal Chose A Haiku As The Winner
The New Vocal Challenge, A Villanelle
And After This New One Started So Well
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Getting Serious About Comedy (Part I)
If I were asked to remark on my life and the childhood that paved some road leading me to this point, I would have to say something about all the funny people who surrounded me for the last 26,872 days (and counting). Somewhere along that road, I became a big fan of laughter and the comedy that spawns it β and, I mean not only my own laughter, but the laughter of others, some of which I have actually been responsible for inducing.
By John Oliver Smith7 days ago in Humor
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Hahahaah, so good!!
ROTFL!!! Left a bloody heart!!!β€οΈππ
Hahahahahahahah you're so hilarious!
Content Warning (my absolute FIRST for a comment) *Running around like a headless chicken-poet* "Don't know what to write or not write where anymore! What is a syllable REALLY anyway? Who gets to say what is haiku or senryu or Scooby Doo? I'm so confuuuuuuuused dot com!!! πππ Good on you Mike!
Was it a haiku or a senryu (with 8 syllables in the second line, lol)?
What. I am confused. ok, but. what. i am still confused. Villanelle is already giving me a headache.
Nicely doneππ½I am working on my Villanelle.
Haha. Screw it. I'm writing a haiku.
Nice