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The Ultimate Goodbye

A Breakup Nonet

By Annie Edwards Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
The Ultimate Goodbye
Photo by Majestic Lukas on Unsplash

I never thought I would see this day,

Much less see the news first online.

How did I NOT SEE the signs?

Would things be different?

Death by suicide…

And just like that,

Abruptly,

The book

Closed…

heartbreakMental HealthStream of Consciousnesssad poetry

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Annie Edwards

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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    The story invoked strong personal emotions

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  • Samuel mainaabout a year ago

    I love this

  • Testabout a year ago

    I like this. You say a lot in few words.

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