THE TWIST
Dancing With Distraction
Din echoes through the mind.
Imagination grind.
Stressing about the world news,
thoughts flooding brings on the blues.
Right or wrong, there's a new slog.
A different, fog
causing pity and pain.
Time slips down the drain.
In a dither, many things on the plate,
obviously, something has to wait.
Never give up, it's a date.
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Writer's notes: This acrostic poem is entered into the Dancing With Distraction Challenge.
According to Vocal, "The Prompt
Write an acrostic using the word distraction.
An acrostic is a form of poetry in which the first letter of each line when read vertically from top to bottom, spells out a word, phrase, or name. It is a creative way to incorporate a hidden message or theme within a poem. The word that is spelled out through the initial letters of each line is typically related to the overall subject or theme of the poem.
The theme of this challenge's acrostic, distraction, can be both a hindrance and a wellspring of inspiration. It pulls our attention away, diverting us from our intended path, yet it also opens doors to unexpected ideas and perspectives. Whether it's the lure of social media, the buzzing chaos of a bustling city, or the cacophony of thoughts battling for attention within our minds, distractions are an ever-present force in our lives. In this contest, we want you to embrace the chaos and uncover the hidden treasures that lie within the realm of distraction."
Thank you for reading...
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Happy trails...
About the Creator
Babs Iverson
Barbara J Iversen, also known as Babs Iverson, lives in Texas and loves her grandkids to the moon and back. After writing one story, she found that writing has many benefits especially during a pandemic and a Texas-size Arctic Blast.
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Comments (40)
Great job Babs and congratulations of this top story in June🎉🎉🎉🎉
You really gave mastered this poetic form. I truly envy your talent!!
Nicely done, Babs!
Ah well, I was hoping for Chubby Checker but still, this was well done Babs!
Sensitive and a nice rhythm to it, liked the twist at the end!
Awesome Work thanks for sharing
Cleverly written. The rhyming is spot on.
This was a fun read, you put a lot of work into it. Congratulations
This is sharp and rhythmic and yes, never give up! Great job Babs and Congratulations on the Top Story!
So unique, great job Babs
Congratulations on your Top Story🎉💖✨
Yes!! Never give up ! Congratulations Babs 💜🥇
Congratulations on Top Story Babs!! A perfect take on the Challenge. I can relate to every word. Thank you for writing … ‘Din echoes through the mind. Imagination grind.’ Pauline 🌸
Never give up it's a date!! I love this ma'am ❤️
Wonderful!!! This is amazing work... Keep Going.
Loved the short, punchy phrases. And I deeply felt time slipping down the drain. Great entry, Babs!! Congratulations on Top Story :)
Absolutely brilliant Babs ! Congratulations on your beautiful top story 🥰
you got me with "Imagination grind." that says it all for me ATM. The rest just flows and distracts! Well done! Congrats on the TS
Wonderful!
Congrats on your TOP STORY Babs!
Woohoo! Congratulations, Babs!
Congrats Babs!!
Congratulations on your Top Story
Phenomenal work Babs! BRAVO!
Great take on the challenge