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The Tattooed Stranger at the Fairground

He took me for a Waltzer Ride

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Tattooed Stranger at the Fairground

He stood by the ghost train,

sleeves rolled high,

ink curling up his arms

like it wanted to speak

I’d gone for chips

and maybe a laugh,

but he looked at me

like I was already late

He flicked his lighter once,

twice,

then held it to a roll-up

like lighting fire was just habit

No hello,

no name,

just a look

that pinned me in place

We walked the stalls,

shoulder to shoulder,

never touched,

but I felt him in my bones

He guessed my star sign right,

stole a toffee apple

from a kid who never noticed,

and grinned like a man

who had never paid for anything twice

I should’ve gone home

when the music cut out,

but he said

Waltzer’s still open

and that was enough

He held the bar with one hand,

held my gaze with the other,

and when the ride spun,

I forgot my own name

I never saw him again,

no shock there,

but sometimes

when I catch the scent of petrol and sugar,

my stomach flips

like it did that night

He was just a passing stranger at the fair

who had taken me for a ride.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Ahmet Kıvanç Demirkıran6 months ago

    This is electric — a perfect blend of danger, nostalgia, and fleeting magic. It reads like a memory you never meant to keep but can’t quite let go of. The scent of petrol and sugar will hit differently now.

  • Calvin London6 months ago

    A wonderfully romantic tale of now you are here, now you are gone. Happens all the time to me in my dreams 😊😊

  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    good

  • Tiffany Gordon6 months ago

    gorgeous!

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