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The Stars Without

Looking to the stars when time runs out...

By JaimiePublished 2 years ago 1 min read
The Stars Without
Photo by Denis Degioanni on Unsplash

I've watched as time ran out

Whilst I sat in deep and silent darkness

That we wouldn't see the stars without

I still doubt

The way that things ended with a harshness

Now I've watched as time ran out

I wasn't sure what it was about

I was blinded by the blackness

That we wouldn't see the stars without.

I'm a hoper of stout

Hopes and dreamer of hopeless

Dreams, now that I've watched as time ran out.

I would have chosen a different route

Had it not been for the starkness

That we wouldn't see the stars without.

Throughout

My life, I had shied from the darkness

But now I'll aim to be more devout

Towards the things we wouldn't see the stars without.

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Jaimie

Amateur writer

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    This was so poignant and emotional! Loved your poem!

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Beautiful!!! Loving it!!!

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