The Sorrow of Your Loss (Part Two)
Delving deeper into the echoes of love, grief, and unyielding longing.

A continuation of the poignant journey from
Whispers of a Broken Heart By Khadija
A Journey Through Shadows of Loss
In the quiet stillness, I search for your trace,
But find only echoes, an empty space.
The days stretch long, a never-ending night,
Where shadows of you haunt the fading light.
I reach for your warmth, but it slips through my hand,
Like grains of sand scattered by the wind’s command.
Your laughter, once a melody, now a silent song,
The music of love, now lost, gone wrong.
I cradle the memories, but they slip and break,
Each one a shard, a wound I can’t forsake.
In the corners of dreams, I see you still,
A ghost of the past that time cannot kill.
I linger on the edge of a world so cold,
Clutching the love that I can’t let go.
I wish for one more moment, one more chance,
To feel your touch in a fleeting dance.
But all I have left is the grief we made,
A love once alive, now a memory that fades.
And so, I walk, heart heavy with the cost,
In the sorrow of your loss, I am forever lost.
About the Creator
Abdullah Khan
I'm Abdullah, a 20-year-old ICMA(Pakistan) student and aspiring writer. Passionate about storytelling, I aim to connect with readers and spark meaningful conversations through my unique perspective.
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Wow, this is stunningly poignant. It beautifully captures the ache of loss and the haunting pull of memories. The imagery and rhythm pull you deep into that quiet sorrow. Incredible work! Abdullah ✨👏
It’s humbling to see my thoughts inspire such a profound response, and your second part adds depth and new dimensions to the story. Thank you for turning this into something we both share—it means so much.