Whispers of a Broken Heart
A Journey Through Shadows of Loss
The sorrow of your loss, a relentless storm,
Drowns my soul in memories forlorn.
Your love, once a beacon, a radiant flare,
Now a void of silence, too much to bear.
The pain you left, a wound unhealed,
A heart that once bloomed, now darkly sealed.
Your absence, an eclipse of all my skies,
The poet within me, silenced by cries.
In your shadow, I wander, a restless ghost,
Seeking fragments of the love I’ve lost.
At your door, my pleas now cease,
You were my everything, now just my grief.
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Comments (4)
Rather than the poet within you being silenced by cries it has become a voice crying in the lonely wilderness. This poetry is a cacophonous whisper speaking to the souls of the bereft. Beautifully expressed.
Ohh! This is heartbreak carved into poetry—raw, haunting, and utterly beautiful. The depth of loss and love here is unmissable. Stunning work!✨🤗
This deeply moving poem encapsulates grief with such poignant elegance—would you be interested in collaborating on a continuation with the same title and cover art?
What an amazing poem! ✨ Your creativity really shines through in this beautifully crafted piece. Keep up the fantastic work! Can’t wait to see more from you! ✨🤟