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The Song of the Lark

For the Sky-ku Challenge

By John CoxPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Song of the Lark by Jules Breton - Henry Field Memorial Collection, Art Institute of Chicago

Your song lifts my eyes

Its notes taking fragile wing

Gossamer beauty

HaikuGratitude

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John Cox

Twisted teller of mind bending tales. I never met a myth I didn't love or a subject that I couldn't twist out of joint. I have a little something for almost everyone here. Cept AI. Aint got none of that.

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  • Caitlin Charltonabout a year ago

    Such a lovely way to ground us to the sound of the lark, how it lifts our eyes in appreciation; how delicate but yet so captivating like the women in the image or the person in our hearts. Absolutely outstanding 👌🏽👏🏽

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Such a contrast with fragile beauty and the undeniable strength of that young woman wielding a sickle...outstanding presentation that blends so deliciously

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    So lovely and lingering in its beauty, John. Well done.

  • C. Rommial Butlerabout a year ago

    Well-wrought, John! I love how the haiku illuminates the painting, and what a clever way for the artist to represent the beauty of the lark's song by depicting the wonder in the face of the listener! She toils in the field with the sickle, but it gives me heart to know that during her day of drudgery she finds a moment of serenity. I often find these moments myself, and usually also in the sky.

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    Great art piece that complements your words but skylarks? They are beautiful.

  • Testabout a year ago

    you are simply the best

  • This is so beautifully uplifting... a perfect fit for the image!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, love this, so ethereal.

  • 𝐑𝐌𝐒about a year ago

    I like this one, John. Well done!

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Oh this is impressive! Beautiful haiku that does its inspiration justice.

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Absolutely nailed it! Good luck 🤞

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Ooh, a sound in the sky, I like it.

  • Anna about a year ago

    Beautiful and soft! Amazing entry, well done!!😊

  • Whoaaaa, that was absolutely stunning! Loved it so much!

  • Gerard DiLeoabout a year ago

    Airy and heartfelt. Beautiful.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Your first line is beautiful

  • Brenabout a year ago

    I know exactly what you mean! Very well done!

  • Heather Zieffle about a year ago

    Ohhh, what a pretty picture this paints! Beautiful words, John!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is beautiful, John. Well done.

  • Rowan Finley about a year ago

    Love it 😍

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Absolutely beautiful!!! 👏👏👏

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