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The Silent Scream Of A Dying Rose

Life short yet romantically full

By Marie381Uk Published 11 months ago Updated 11 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Silent Scream Of A Dying Rose

He plucked the petals one by one,

His fingers slow, his grip secure.

The crimson folds, once kissed by sun,

Now trembled, fragile, pale, unsure.

I heard the flower’s silent cry,

The rose refused to say goodbye.

A whisper lost where love has been

A wound too soft, too small to be seen.

Each petal fell, a quiet death,

A stolen blush, a fading trace.

The stem stood bare, yet held its breath,

Still reaching for a vanished grace.

Then when his hand had done its will,

The rose lay torn, its beauty still.

Yet something in the air stayed,

A ghost of all the love that it had made.

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Jason “Jay” Benskin11 months ago

    Marie, You’ve captured the quiet despair of fading beauty and unspoken pain in such a important way. There’s something so powerful about the idea of a rose, often a symbol of love and vitality, turning inward in silence, echoing the struggles we sometimes face but don’t speak of. Great work.

  • Lana V Lynx11 months ago

    Beautiful, Marie. Is the word “stayed” in the last but one line used twice deliberately?

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