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The Serpent’s Gaze

The last thing you will see before death

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Serpent’s Gaze

Look into my eyes, the serpent said,

See death before it strikes you dead.

A whisper coils, a venomous tune,

Sung beneath a silver moon.

Your breath halts, your veins run cold,

Time unwinds, the stars grow old.

A dance of fate, a tangled thread,

One step closer—you’ll join the dead.

No sword can cut, no shield can save,

No prayer will reach beyond the grave.

For once you gaze, you are no more,

A statue on the forest floor.

So turn away, while choice remains,

Or bear the weight of endless chains.

The serpent waits, its hunger deep,

To drag you down… into its forever sleep

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Pure Crown10 months ago

    Wow this is awesome 💯

  • Ellie Hoovs10 months ago

    This line gave me chills "One step closer—you’ll join the dead"!! So funny - we must have both been in a reptilian mood today as I also wrote a snake inspired poem that is sitting in draft land limbo.

  • Lana V Lynx10 months ago

    This is haunting, Marie. I immediately remembered Medusa.

  • Very well written, congrats 👏

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    To me this is kind of chilling for the reason of the serpent's words were chillingly expressed. Good job.

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