Don't waste precious time,
clinging to a rocky path.
Else, life may drown you.
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Cathy holmes
Canadian family girl with a recently discovered love for writing. Other loves include animals and sports.
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶a day ago in Petlife
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Great Cathy! Great.
Lovely words
Facts 💯😉🙏❤️
You've got it right--again!
Nice , totally agree👌🥰
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Why do I feel attacked? Lol. So much truth to this! I loved it!
You nailed it!!!💕💖😊
very nice 😀
Dang Cathy, this poem is so garsh darn right that there's nothing gosh darn wrong with it. You're just spitting straight facts.
So true 💚
Truth
Beautiful words that sadly hold a little too much truth. Loved this.