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The Rites of Wrong

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By Gerard DiLeoPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
And play to only the royal strong...

How could I be so wrong

About being so goddamn right

How could I do it for so long

And lose the goddamn fight

.

How could I walk along

The path without my sight

Why hum along to the song

Of the Sirens who smite so quite

.

How could I bang a loyal gong

To the rhythmic staccato of might

And play to only the royal strong

And the changing tunes they write

.

Why do I long to so belong

To the ones who sit so tight

Above the tongues of hangers-on

Who only thirst for height

.

The pyramid that seems to spawn

Keystones of kings, alight

Who roll downhill to the pawns—

Like them--and me--alike

.

Winners and losers start out at dawn

The same and equal, despite

The change they will have undergone

Of lifetimes overnight

.

Abundance and effacement march on

Some accruing, others lost in fright

Once I succumbed to the rites of wrong

I'd lost the goddamn fight

...and the changing tunes they write

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Gerard DiLeo

Retired, not tired. Hippocampus, behave!

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My substrack at https://substack.com/@drdileo

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  • L.C. Schäfer2 years ago

    Deep stuff, I like it! Yours are always so clever 😁

  • Well-wrought! A story as old as time where, in perhaps more ways than one, only the names have changed...

  • Oooo, this was so profound! Loved it!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    The only thing that could make this extraordinary poem better is if Leonard Cohen was still alive to sing it. Absolutely, freakin' brilliant, Gerard!

  • Heather Hubler2 years ago

    Wonderfully clever with so many truths woven in! I loved the word play there in the sub-title. And that fourth stanza, wow!!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Well said!!

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