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The Reaping

Upon the Gathering of All That Slips Away

By Tim CarmichaelPublished 3 months ago 1 min read

The scythe swings through the field of every yesterday

Each stroke a careful cutting of what grew between us

I harvest all the silence where your laughter lived

And bind it into sheaves, each one a great burden

What are we save gleaners of our own undoing

Stooping low to gather what the seasons gave and took

Every word a seed that ripened into absence

Every glance a root that withered in the ground

The fields yield nothing permanent

Yet still I reap the morning you first touched my hand

The afternoon we sat beside the water saying everything

The evening when we knew and did neither speak nor turn away

We thresh our hours for what will last beyond them

Separate the wheat of truth from chaff of all we meant to say

Keep only what will feed us when the harvest fails

When fields lie fallow and our hands forget their purpose

The granary grows heavy with invisible grain

The taste of someone's name upon my lips

The taste of rain before a summer storm

The feeling of becoming who I am inside a single moment

That will never come again no matter how I call it back

These are the yields of being here

Of walking through a world that gives and takes

And when I hold them close, they cut me

Sharp as any scythe that severs stalk from earth

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About the Creator

Tim Carmichael

Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.

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  • K.B. Silver 3 months ago

    The atmosphere, the motions, the heavy burden of memory, collected and redistributed to make life more bearable. Perfectly captured and translated. 👏👏🌾

  • JBaz3 months ago

    As a person who grew up on the prairies I appreciate how you wove these thoughts as an integral part equal to one another, the connections of both ideas enhances a complex metaphor of life.

  • Darla M Seely3 months ago

    Well expressed, wonderful poem, Tim

  • C. Rommial Butler3 months ago

    Well-wrought! I love this metaphor of the scythe and a harvest of memories. The field can grow wild sometimes, and we must prune it back lest we get lost in our own thoughts. Have you ever read Ray Bradbury's short story THE SCYTHE? If not, I highly recommend! I feel it would resonate deeply with your poem here and its train of thought. Your poems sometimes remind me of Ray's short stories, weaving the symbolic through the practical real.

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