The Burning Life
Wherein Flame Instructs the Living Soul

We are as flames that feed upon the air,
Consuming time as if it were our fare.
Each breath we draw becomes the fuel we spend,
To keep alight until we meet our end.
The body serves as kindling for the mind,
While both together burn through humankind.
And what we call our living is the heat
That rises up before we are complete.
Some blaze with such ferocious appetite,
They devour their own substance in their flight,
While others smolder long through patient years,
And loved ones well their matter and their tears.
Yet every soul must reckon with the law
That what burns bright leaves little left to draw
Upon when coldness comes to claim its due,
And all that fire forgets what fire knew.
We think ourselves the masters of our blaze,
As if we might extend our burning days
Through will alone or wisdom gathered late,
When flame itself determines every fate.
The truth remains that life will have its way
With those who burn and those who only stay
Aglow with careful tending of their spark,
Until the final cooling brings the dark.
So let us burn as generously as we dare,
And meet our ending in the open air,
Where smoke ascends and ash returns to ground,
And silence now is all that can be found.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.


Comments (2)
I love how you made this rhyme so beautifully despite it being a stream of consciousness poem!
Tim, I really love this beautiful poem.